Hi,

I was having a look at your progress of my research critique and
wanted to add a few comments.

I love what you have done so far, WOW it looks great.

But is necessary to have the references in the reference list included
in the intext references in the assignment. For example, 15 references
in the reference list, those 15 references included in the intext
references in the assignment. I know it is still incomplete, but I
just wanted to bring this up.

Also, you can use more than 10 references. It will look better if you
use maybe 14 - 18 references. Do you have any more of your own books?

Finally, can you email me at this address when the critique is
completed so I can go online and view it.

Thanks,

 

E. Q., Sydney, Australia