Dear Vic,   Hope my e-mail find you in good health, first of all I would like to thank you regard my research proposal (patient satisfaction) which you prepared. secondly I would like you to share me my concern that I sent the proposal to my instructor and he  just has small comment that the introduction is very short, and he asked me to increase it , so I appreciate if you write  the introduction to be one page .   Thanks a lot.   A. A., United Arab Emirates