The paper is a good paper, But it doesn't detail enough, didn't look back in unit 2 and unit 3 and lock of sufficient intext-citation. I did sent you Unit 2 IP  and unit 3IP for you to have the idea where the project is coming from. Please I am asking you to do the necessary revision and let me received it before Friday. Please let me hear from you right away. Y. E., Melbourne, Australia