Dear Vic
Thanks for your email! After reviewing the dissertation, overall is very good and just have the following concern:
- the dissertation only focus on ........; therefore, need to amend the wordings especially main part of methodology as it applied lots of samples in Shangri-la group
- will it be too many wordings with the first few parts only as whole dissertation is only around 10,000 wordings
- Can you please use my reference standard?
Wait for your amendment again! But it's really an impressive dissertation!
Thanks 
W. R. Hong Kong