hi there!!!   thanks for the essay. to be honest it was a very difficult essay to correct. i really gave you something hard to do. you tried to follow the instructions but still you need more reading in the area. it is a pain, i know. this is my area so, i know where the problem was. there were some bear mistakes, like Mrs. dalloway killed herself. it never happened. it was an initial idea long ago of virginia woolf but she moved away from it. and some concepts of modernism and postmodernism within modern fiction, you many times contradict yourself in the essay. the essay was a bit disconnected but thank you anyway. i will have to add stuff on it but i am read for that. no revision is needed, i can take from there.   i do appreciate your enormous help. once again thank you and i will need you again, surely.   please do follow it to the writer, he has been such a great help. he did his best, i am sure.   thank you.   R. T., New York, U.S.A.