Hi Vic, The dissertation of ......, its seems much improve now but just littler bit part need to add some information . the more details please check attach and thank you for the writer job ..I NEED THE FINAL PAPER BY 21TH OCT 2009...this is the last time to do the revise ..please let writer becarefull and send back to me by today !!!!!   Many Thanks     Regards,   J. H., Vancouver, Canada