First of all i have not read it if it makes sense.secondly he still used about four books,which he can get those information from somewhere in an article,my main concern now is that,all the paragraphs have  one reference,this lecturer wants almost every two lines referenced because these are not your ideas you got it from somewhere he said,the introduction no reference.lastly it is 5,000 words not 4,000.welldone the work looks good but if not properly referenced,he said it will be 0%.and the reference list should be harvard referencing,not just paste it there.   G. H. London, United Kingdom