Hi Ivythesis,

 

Thank you very much.

 

Pls rewrite Chapter 6, the first part of it reflects the actual topic, while the rest part of it looks more of the contunuation of the management risk in 4:3.

 

3 figures and  statistics used are not reflective of a 15000 words dissertation. Pls add use some more.

 

Thank you very much for your help, once this amendments have been made, i will revise it and send a draft copy in, after which i will await a response from my supervisor, and whatever amendments are to be made, will be communicated to you for correction.

 

Thank you, i am actually happy with the writing style.

 

S. D., London, United Kingdom

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